ENG 101: Composition I
Fall 2011
Section N1: Tue. 2:30–5:15 PM, North Annex, 500 Endo Blvd. 203
Section EG1: T/Th 5:30–
6:50 PM, South Hall 102

Keys for Writers, 5 ed.Keys for Writers, 5 ed.

Brian T. Murphy

Nassau Community College
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Description

Objectives

Texts

Policies 

Assignments

 Grading 

Schedule

Links

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Print-friendly (MS Word) course syllabus here.
Other printable documents:
Model for Evaluation of Student Writing
 Works Cited page (Instructions & Sample)
Cover Page for Research Essays (Sample)
Standard MLA Format for Essays
Revision and Editing Checklist
Incorporating Sources
Paragraph Outline
Essay Outline

 

DESCRIPTION:
This course prepares students to produce clear, well-developed, well-organized, grammatically correct writing. The curriculum is designed to give students guided practice in drafting, revising, and editing essays. The course is also designed to develop the skills that enable students to interpret and analyze published texts. In addition to readings assigned in class, students respond to texts they locate themselves through research and write at least one documented or research essay. 

Prerequisites: ENG 001, ENG 030 or placement by Department, RDG 001, concurrent enrollment in RDG 030 or placement by Department.

 

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OBJECTIVES: Students will:

1.  Respond orally and in writing to texts, primarily nonfiction.

2.  Write as a way of exploring, developing, and confirming ideas in a process of communicating them

3.  Compose essays that support and develop a point of view, using a variety of composing strategies.

4.  Self-evaluate using a vocabulary specific to the discipline in order to discuss, revise, and edit one's own writing and the writing of others.

5.  Revise in order to substantially improve the focus, organization, and development of ideas.

6.  Locate, evaluate, and cull information from archival and/or electronic sources.

7.  Summarize, paraphrase, quote, and use MLA-style citations to document course reading and materials found through research in the construction and expression of a point of view.

8.  Edit and proofread for usage and correctness of grammar, spelling, and punctuation.

9.  Produce approximately 4,000–6,000 words across a series of written assignments and essays subject to evaluation, at least one of which is an essay of 1,000–1,500 words.

 

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TEXTS:
Required:

Behrens, Laurence and Leonard J. Rosen. Writing and Reading Across the Curriculum, 11 ed. Boston: Longman, 2011.
(Available used starting at $49.37 at Amazon.com***)
(see also Additional Textbook Options, below)

Hacker, Diana. Rules for Writers, 6 ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2009, or another current college-level handbook including 2009 MLA updates.
(Available used starting at $9.99 at Amazon.com***)
(see also Additional Textbook Options, below)

A good college-level (paperback) dictionary (Available used starting at $0.01 at Amazon.com***).

Recommended additional texts:**

Bloom, Harold. How to Read and Why. New York: Scribner, 2000. (Available starting at $1.00 at Amazon.com***)

Bettleheim, Bruno. The Uses of Enchantment. New York: Knopf, 1976 (Available starting at $2.01 at Amazon.com***).

Casagrande, June. Grammar Snobs are Great Big Meanies: A Guide to Language for Fun and Spite. New York: Penguin, 2006. (Available starting at $3.94 at Amazon.com***)

---. Mortal Syntax: 101 Language Choices That Will Get You Clobbered by the Grammar SnobsEven If You’re Right. New York: Penguin, 2008 (Available used starting at $6.61 at Amazon.com***).

Cathcart, Thomas and Daniel Klein. "Logic." Plato and a Platypus Walk into a Bar...: Understanding Philosophy Through Jokes. New York: Abrams Image, 2006. 27-49. (Available used starting at $6.73 at Amazon.com**)

---. Aristotle and an Aardvark Go to Washington: Understanding Political Doublespeak through Through Philosophy and Jokes. New York: Abrams Image, 2007. 27-49 (Available used starting at $10.85 at Amazon.com***).

Crystal, David. Words, Words, Words. New York: Oxford U P, 2006 (Available used starting at $9.28 at Amazon.com***).

Datlow, Ellen and Terri Windling, eds. Snow White, Blood Red. New York: William Morrow, 1993. (Available used starting at $16.98 at Amazon.com***).

Franz, Marie-Louise von and Kendra Crossen. The Interpretation of Fairy Tales. [New York?]: Shambhala, 1976. ( Available starting at $11.99 at Amazon.com***).†

Garvey, Mark. Stylized: A Slightly Obsessive History of Strunk & White's The Elements of Style. New York: Touchstone/Simon & Schuster, 2009. (Available starting at $14.48 at Amazon.com ***).†

Kozol, Jonathan. Letters to a Young Teacher. New York: Crown, 2007 (Available starting at $12.15 at Amazon.com***).

---. The Shame of the Nation: The Restoration of Apartheid Schooling in America. New York: Crown, 2005 (Available starting at $10.17 at Amazon.com***).

Lederer, Richard. Anguished English: An Anthology of Accidental Assaults Upon Our Language. Charleston, SC: Wyrick & Company, 1987 (Available used starting at $0.01 at Amazon.com***).

Lederer, Richard. More Anguished English: An Expose of Embarrassing Excruciating, and Egregious Errors in English. New York: Dell, 1994 (Available used starting at $0.01 at Amazon.com***).

Orenstein, Peggy. Cinderella Ate My Daughter: Dispatches From the Front Lines of the New Girlie-Girl Culture. New York: Harper/HarperCollins, 2011. (Available starting at $15.59 at Amazon.com***).

Truss, Lynne. Eats, Shoots & Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation. New York: Gotham Books, 2004 (Available used starting at $2.70 at Amazon.com***).

*Note: Many of the essays to be read and discussed are available online; these are indicated on the schedule (below) as hyperlinks. However, students are still strongly cautioned that they will need to purchase the textbook, both for important information and instructions on the various rhetorical modes and also for several essays not available online.

** Recommended additional texts are not required purchases, and have not been ordered for the course; however, they provide—depending on the course— alternative readings, historical and cultural backgrounds, criticism, personal literary responses, or entertaining (irreverent, possibly sacrilegious) revisions. Students who find themselves becoming deeply interested in one or more of the required readings may find these interesting and/or useful. When indicated with a dagger (†), texts are only provisionally recommended, as I have not read these works yet, although they have received excellent reviews or recommendations.

*** Prices listed at Amazon.com do not include shipping, and are accurate as of original posting date only; no guarantees of prices or availability are express or implied§.

 

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CLASS POLICIES:

Attendance:
Students must not only attend every class, but also arrive on time, be prepared, and take an active part in class (see Participation, below); students may be required to sign in each class session to verify their attendance. Moreover, once students get to class, they are expected to stay in the classroom until the class is over. Leaving class early or getting up in the middle of class is considered disruptive behavior and should happen only in extreme emergencies.

Excessive absences or latenesses will affect your grade; students missing more than four classes will fail the course. Students unable to attend class should contact the instructor regarding their absence in advance or as soon as they return to school.

Plagiarism and Cheating:
Plagiarism includes copying or paraphrasing another’s words, ideas, or facts without crediting the source; submitting a paper written by someone else, either in whole or in part, as one’s own work; or submitting work previously submitted for another course or instructor. Plagiarism, cheating, or other forms of academic dishonesty on any assignment will result in failure (a grade of zero) for that assignment and may result in further disciplinary action, including but not limited to failure for the course and expulsion from the college. See the Nassau Community College Policy on Academic Dishonesty and Plagiarism (page 63 in the college catalog).

Homework/Essay Submission:
All writing assignments must be received by the instructor on or before the due date, by the beginning of the class period, as indicated on the schedule, below.
Essays submitted by email or otherwise submitted late will not be accepted; see below. All at-home work must be typed (in 12-point Times New Roman), double-spaced, with one-inch margins, and stapled when submitted. In-class work must be neatly printed in blue or black ink on loose-leaf composition paper or in bluebooks provided by the instructor and double-spaced§. All essays must also include a proper heading (see Purdue Online Writing Lab's Formatting and Style Guide), including Word Count; have an appropriate, original title; contain a clear, explicit, assertive, objectively worded thesis statement (thesis statements must be underlined); and (unless otherwise indicated) avoid use of I or you throughout. Finally, all work should be grammatically correct, free of errors in mechanics, grammar, usage, spelling, and documentation, and will be evaluated according to the Model for Evaluation of Student Writing. Please refer to the Paragraph Outline or Essay Outline and Revising and Editing Checklist for additional assistance.

§  On format, handwriting, and neatness, see Chase, Clinton I. “Essay Test Scoring: Interaction of Relevant Variables.” Journal of Educational Measurement 23.1 (1986): 33-41; and  Marshall, Jon C. and Jerry M. Powers. “Writing Neatness, Composition Errors, and Essay Grades.” Journal of Educational Measurement 6.2 (1988): 306-324.

Revisions:
All failing essays may be revised and resubmitted by the due dates announced when the graded essays are returned.
Essays receiving a passing grade may also be revised and resubmitted, but only after the student has met with the instructor during office hours (by appointment only) to discuss revisions.

Revisions must be substantially revised, not merely “corrected” versions of the original essay (revisions should be based upon the Revising and Editing Checklist and relevant information from class and the textbooks), and must be submitted with the original graded essay and/or draft(s) attached. Evidence of substantial revision may result in a better grade for the assignment. 

If you did not submit a completed essay on time, you will receive a grade of 0 and may not submit a “revision.”

Make-up Exams/Late Work:
All assignment deadlines and scheduled exam dates are provided at the beginning of the semester; therefore, late papers will not be accepted nor will make-up opportunities be offered, except under extraordinary circumstances with appropriate documentation. Excuses such as “crashed computers,” “lost flash drives,” or “empty printer ink cartridges” will not be accepted; therefore, all essays or work should be saved both on your computer’s hard drive and again on removable storage device, and students should keep backup copies of all work submitted.

Disabilities and Accommodations :
If you have a physical, psychological, medical, or learning disability that may adversely impact your ability to carry out the assigned coursework, contact the staff at the Center for Students with Disabilities (CSD) in Building U: 572-7241, TTY 572-7617. CSD will review your concerns and determine with you what accommodations are necessary and appropriate. All information and documentation are confidential.

 

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ASSIGNMENTS:
Attendance and Participation (5 points):
As this class will combine both lecture and discussion, students are expected both to attend every session and to take an active part in class—joining in discussions and raising questions. Discussion is one of the best ways to clarify your understandings and to test your conclusions. Open discussion always involves personal exposure, and thus the taking of risks: your ideas may not be the same as your fellow students’ or even the instructor’s. Yet as long as your points are honest and supportable, they will be respected. Questions, discussion, disagreement, and laughter are all encouraged .

Diagnostic Essay (ungraded):
Students will complete an in-class Diagnostic Essay at the beginning of  the semester on a topic provided; this essay will be read and returned, but will not receive a grade, nor will it affect your final average. Students should retain this and all other essays until the end of the semester.

Quizzes and Exercises  (5 points total):
With the exception of the first week, class may begin with a short (five-minute) quiz on the readings for the day, at the instructor’s discretion. Quizzes cannot be made up; if you miss a quiz due to absence or lateness, that grade will be regarded as a zero. At the end of the semester, the lowest quiz grade will be dropped. Exercises reviewing essential grammar and/or writing skills may also be assigned, to be completed in class, or to be done online as homework and submitted electronically. Total number of quizzes and exercises during the semester will determine the point value of each; that is, if 11 assignments are assigned (lowest quiz grade will be dropped), each is worth up to one-half point.

In-Class Writing  (10 points total):
Students will also complete various shorter in-class writing assignments during the semester, including short summaries, mini-essays, and response papers. Total number of assignments during the semester will determine the point value of each; that is, if 10 assignments are required, each is worth up to one full point.

Essays (4 @ 12.5 points):
Students will complete at least three expository essays during the semester on topics selected from the list of suggestions provided (see Essay Topics) or developed in consultation with the instructor, including an in-class final essay. Essays must be at least three to four (3-4) pages (750 to 1000 words) and correctly formatted; see above. Graded essays and revisions should be retained by students after they are returned.

Research Essay (25 points total):
Students will also complete an argumentative (persuasive) Research Essay of at least five to seven pages (at least 1250-1500 words), using a minimum of three to five primary or secondary sources (sources must be reliable: scholarly criticism or analysis, not summaries, reviews, or “analysis” from sites such as Wikipedia, 123HelpMe, or Gradesaver.com), correctly documented utilizing MLA format, with a cover page and Works Cited page (cover page and Works Cited do not count toward the six-page requirement). The research essay will be completed in stages during the semester; points will accrue as follows:

Topic Selection (5 points):
Before beginning the research essay assignment, students will develop and submit a clear, well-written, one-page explanation of the topic chosen from the list provided and the reason for selection. This proposal should include a preliminary idea of the plan of the paper, its intention or research question, and a preliminary thesis.

Annotated Bibliography (5 points):
Students will develop and submit an annotated bibliography for the research essay assignment, with a minimum of five to seven sources, correctly documented according to MLA format.

Research Paper: Final Draft (15 points):
The final draft of the research paper must be submitted in a folder, including copies of all sources used and all of the above assignments associated with the research paper.

Extra Credit (possibly various opportunities, at 1–2 points each):
Students may be notified of opportunities for extra credit during the semester, including attendance at various cultural events related to the class (Recommended Fieldtrips). If students attend one or more of these events, and provide evidence of attendance (ticket stub, program, unretouched digital image, et cetera) along with a typed one- to two-page personal response (review, analysis, reflection, critique, et cetera), they can receive additional points: a single event and written response is worth 2 points extra credit; attendance at additional events will earn one additional point each.

Note: As a general rule, extra credit only helps if you have already completed all of the assigned work, and will not make up for missing an essay (or two, or three). Extra credit opportunities for Fall 2011 will be announced in class, and they will also be posted here as well as on the class Announcements page, so do not ask at the end of the semester for extra credit to bring your average up. Students asking for extra points or changes to their grade may have their grade reduced, instead.

Extra Credit to date includes:

WRITING CENTER Fall 2011

Grammar Review Workshops

 

Wednesday Series: 2:00–3:15 pm in the Ballroom

October 5: Sentence Boundaries

October 19: Subject-Verb Agreement

November 2: The Verb Phrase

Thursday Series: 11:30 am to 12:45 pm in L233A

October 6: Sentence Boundaries

October 20: Subject-Verb Agreement

November 3: The Verb Phrase

Evening Series: 7:00 to 8:15 pm in L233A

Thursday, Nov. 7: Sentence Constructions (Coordination and Subordination) and Sentence Boundary Problems (Run-ons. Comma Splices, and Fragments)

Seating is limited! Sign up at the Writing Center in advance.

The Writing Centers are located in Bradley Hall (Y Bldg.) and on the second floor of the Library, room L233.

572-7195 or 3595

e-mail: wcenter@ncc.edu

www.ncc.edu/writingcenter

 

LIBRARY WORKSHOPS Fall 2011
Learn how to plan, research, and prepare better research papers

All Sessions will be in Room L103 (Library first floor) 11:30–12:45

Papers? Where to Begin

Tuesday, September 20

Finding the Best Websites

Thursday, October 13

Finding Literary Criticism,

Tuesday, November 1

Formatting and Citations

Thursday, November 17

 

Sponsored by the NCC Library Department

Certificates will be awarded.

All workshops are drop-in sessions.

Seating is limited.

For more information call 572-7408 or email us through the Ask the Librarian link at www.library.ncc.edu.

 

 

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GRADING:
Final average will be calculated as follows:

Attendance and Class Participation

5 points

Quizzes and Exercises

5 points

In-Class Writing

10 points

Essays (4 @ 12.5 points)
(includes in-class final essay)

50 points

Research Paper:

30 points

Topic Selection (5 points)

 

Annotated Bibliography (5 points)

 

Final Draft (20 points)

 

Total

100 points

Extra Credit (if any) will be added to the final total.

Total Points earned (Final Average) will determine the grade received for the course, as follows:

Total Points

Final Percentage

Final Grade

90–100+

90–100+

A

8589

8589

  B+

8084 8084 B

7579

7579

  C+

7074

7074

C

6569

6569

D+
6064 6064 D

059

059

F

Note: Percentages ending in .5 or greater are rounded up. Therefore, 79.5 rounds to 80, a B, but 79.4 rounds to 79, a C+.

 

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OUTLINE:

Please select the appropriate section from the links below (Schedule will open in new window)

Section N1: Tue. 2:30–5:15 PM, North Annex, 500 Endo Blvd. 203

Section EG1: T/Th 5:30–6:50 PM, South Hall 102

Important Dates: FALL SEMESTER 2011

Thurs., Sept. 1

Day, Evening, Distance Education/Online classes begin

Fri., Sept. 2

Evening classes do not meet

Mon., Sept. 5

Labor Day: College Holiday

Wed., Sept. 7

Last Day for Drop/Add

Fri., Sept. 9

Weekend classes begin

Wed., Sept. 28

Evening classes do not meet

Thurs,, Sept. 29

Rosh Hashanah - College Holiday

Fri., Sept. 30

Day classes do not meet

Fri., Oct. 7

Evening classes do not meet

Sat., Oct. 8

Yom Kippur - Classes do not meet

Fri., Nov. 4

Last Day For Automatic W

Tues,, Nov. 8

Day Classes follow a Friday schedule
Evening classes meet as scheduled

Fri., Nov. 11

Veterans' Day - College Holiday

Mon., Nov. 21

Evening classes follow a Wednesday schedule

Wed., Nov. 23

Day classes follow a Friday schedule;
Evening classes do not meet

Thurs,, Nov. 24
Sun,, Nov. 27

Thanksgiving - Classes Do Not Meet

Tues, Dec. 13
Thurs,, Dec. 15

Evening classes extended by 5 minutes for Final Exam

Sun., Dec. 18

Weekend classes end

Mon., Dec. 19

Evening classes extended by 5 Minutes for Final Exam;
Evening classes end

Thurs., Dec. 22

Day classes & Online/Distance Education end

See Academic Calendar – Fall 2011

 

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TOPICS:

For each of the assigned essays and projects, a topic or list of topic choices will be provided. Your work must be on one of the assigned topics for that assignment or developed in consultation with the instructor, or it will receive a grade of “F”. All work must be submitted on or before the due date, by the beginning of the class period; late work will not be accepted (see above). Failure to bring the required essay will result in a zero for the assignment, without opportunity for revisions.

For each of the essays, select one of the topics to discuss in a well-developed, coherent, and thoughtful essay. Be sure to focus carefully on the topic, and remember that these are formal essays: they must have an appropriate, original title; contain an introduction, body, and conclusion; have a clear, explicit, assertive, objectively worded thesis statement (thesis statements must be underlined); and (unless otherwise indicated) avoid use of I or you throughout.

Please feel free to communicate any concerns or questions to me before the essays are due; I will be available to meet with any student who needs assistance or additional instruction. Please speak to me before or after class or email me to set up an appointment during my office hours.

 

Diagnostic Essay: Tuesday, 6 Sept. (Sections N1and EG1)
Select one of the following topics and compose a formal essay. Your essay will not receive a grade, nor will it affect your final average; this is for evaluative purposes only. You will have approximately one hour to complete this essay.

    1.  What is “the American Dream”? Is the American Dream accessible for everyone in the United States? Why or why not?

    2.  Who is left out of or marginalized by American society? How do people gain “admission” to American society?

 

Essay 1: “Cinderella” Comparison-and-Contrast (Print-friendly version of instructions here)
Due
Tuesday, 20 Sept. (Sections N1 and EG1)

Required revisions and/or resubmissions due Tuesday, 4 Oct.

Second (optional) revisions due Tuesday, 25 Oct.

After reading  “The Comparison-and-Contrast Synthesis” (WR 173-181) and “Seven Variants of Cinderella” (WR 623-645), select two of the variants and compose a persuasive essay contrasting the two; that is, you must assert something significant about the subjects, that one of the two is in some way superior to the other (for example, A is funnier than B because...). In addition, your essay should have a title, ideally one more creative or original than A vs. B,” and use appropriate topic sentences, as follows:

Thesis:  An assertion concerning the two stories chosen for your essay, indicating the specific significant difference between the two and the major divisions of your essay.

For example:  Although A and B are (similar in some way or ways), A (is superior in some way to) B because of (major criteria: the divisions of your essay).
Although Batman and Superman are both internationally famous superheroes, Batman is a human being and therefore a far better superhero than Superman; Bruce Wayne's intelligence, his self-developed skills, and his much cooler toys make him more believable and realistic than the alien, Superman.

Topic sentence 1:  An assertion about how one single criterion, your first major division, distinguishes the two subjects.

For example: The first way in which A (is superior in some way to) B is (first major criterion):
First, while Superman is undoubtedly stronger than Batman, due to his extraterrestrial origin, Bruce Wayne is far more intelligent than his Metropolis-based competitor.

Topic sentence 2:  An assertion about how one single criterion, your second major division, distinguishes the two subjects.

For example: In addition, A (is superior in some way to) B because (second major criterion):
In addition, since Superman came from Krypton, his powers are merely a seemingly magical result of his extraterrestrial origin, whereas Bruce Wayne has developed his own strength, agility, and crime-fighting abilities through constant training and practice.

Topic sentence 3:  An assertion about how one single criterion, your third major division, distinguishes the two subjects.

For example: More importantly, A is also (superior in third major criterion to) B:
Superman is completely dependent on the powers he receives from Earth's yellow sun, and is totally helpless when confronted with Kryptonite, whereas Bruce Wayne as Batman has an almost unlimited supply of wonderful weapons, devices, and means of transportation he has developed.

 

Essay 2: “Energy Independence” Critique/Synthesis (Print-friendly version of instructions here)
Due Tuesday, 25 Oct. (Section N1), Thursday, 20 Oct. (Section EG1)

Revisions will be due one week after graded essays are returned in class

Be sure you have carefully read not only “Explanatory Synthesis” (A Writer's Resource 91-131) but also all four of the assigned essays on alternative energy: “Global Warming: Beyond the Tipping Pointing” (WR 283-289); “The Climate for Change” (WR 301-304); The Dangerous Delusions of Energy Independence” (WR 304-31) (in online text, read only Page 1 through 4-first paragraph-and page 7 through 10-first full paragraph); and “National Security Consequences of U.S. Oil Dependence” (WR 311-315).

Then, utilizing at least two to three of the essays, compose a well-developed, coherent, and thoughtful essay explaining the importance of developing energy independence, and the problems associated with alleviating our dependence on foreign oil.  

This essay should be an explanatory synthesis, not a persuasive essay; that is, it is predominantly informative, not argumentative. Be sure to include evidence, examples, or other support from the texts, but remember that you are synthesizing ideas from the texts, not merely summarizing the essays, and do not copy directly from the text unless quoting. When quoting (or paraphrasing), remember to incorporate sources correctly: use appropriate signal phrases and parenthetical citations. For example:

According to Al Gore, in “Getting The Climate for Change,” climate change presents an “imminent and rapidly growing threat” (301) not only to the American economy, but to the world.

In “The Dangerous Delusions of Energy Independence” Robert Bryce states that “America’s self-image is inextricably bound to the concepts of freedom and autonomy” (311).

Your essays must be typed (in 12-point Times New Roman), double-spaced, with one-inch margins, and stapled when submitted. All essays must also have a proper heading, including your name, course and section number, instructor's name, date, and word count, and should be grammatically correct, free of errors in mechanics, grammar, usage, spelling, and documentation. In addition, your essay should have an appropriate title, ideally one more creative or original than “Energy Independence” or, even more obvious, “Energy Independence: Pros and Cons.”

 

Essay 3: “Marriage and the Family” Argument (Print-friendly version of instructions here)
Due Tuesday, 29 Nov.
(Section N1); Thursday, 1 Dec. (Section EG1)
Revisions will be due one week after graded essays are returned in class

Be sure you have carefully read Constructing Reasonable Arguments” and “Evaluating Arguments”  (Rules for Writers 358-380) as well as “What Is an Argument Synthesis?” (A Writer's Resource 132-140) and “Developing and Organizing the Support for Your Arguments” (WR 170-173), in addition to all of the assigned essays on marriage and the family: Stephanie Coontz’sA Pop Quiz on Marriage” and The Radical Idea of Marrying for Love,” “The State of Our Unions,” “A Debate On Gay Marriage” (essays by Andrew Sullivan and William J. Bennett), “American Marriage in Transition” and “The Myth of Co-Parenting: How It Was Supposed to Be.”

Then, utilizing at least two to three of the essays, compose a well-developed, coherent, and thoughtful argument essay on one of the following topics:

1.) Marriageas it is popularly understood in our culture todayis (or is not) a mere societal construct.

2.) Gay marriage should (or should not) be legalized

3.) Contemporary marriages are (or are not) unfair and repressive.

Note that each of these topics is broad enough to allow several different approaches, and that you should narrow them or define them more specifically in order to keep your essay manageable.

Remember, the essay should be a persuasive essay; that is, argumentative rather than purely informative. Be sure to include evidence, examples, or other support from the texts, and be sure not only to present support for your assertion, but to present and refute opposing arguments as well. Remember that you are synthesizing ideas from the texts in support of your claim, not merely summarizing the essays, and do not copy directly from the text unless quoting. When quoting (or paraphrasing), remember to incorporate sources correctly: use appropriate signal phrases and parenthetical citations.

As always, your essays must be typed (in 12-point Times New Roman), double-spaced, with one-inch margins, and stapled when submitted. All essays must also have a proper heading, including your name, course and section number, instructor's name, date, and word count, and should be grammatically correct, free of errors in mechanics, grammar, usage, spelling, and documentation. In addition, your essay should have an appropriate title, ideally one more creative or original than “Gay Marriage” or, even more obvious, “Gay Marriage: Pros and Cons.”

 

Research Paper: Due in stages (see below)
Compose a clear, well-written, properly documented (MLA format) argumentative essay of at least five to seven pages (1250-1500 words minimum), with a cover page and Works Cited page (cover page and Works Cited do not count toward the five- to seven-page requirement). The paper must be argumentative (persuasive), with a clear, explicit, and assertive thesis statement, and must use a minimum of three to five secondary sources; secondary sources must be scholarly criticism or analysis, not summaries, reviews, or analysis” from sites such as Wikipedia, 123HelpMe, or Gradesaver.com. You must include at least one short quotation, one long—block—quotation, and one paraphrase, and these sources must be properly documented (utilizing MLA format), and integrated into your writing smoothly and correctly. See also Research Paper checklist.

Please refer to the following as well:

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   Formatting and Style Guide (Purdue Online Writing Lab)

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   Incorporating Sources (class handout)

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   Class Plagiarism Policy (on syllabus), as well as the Nassau Community College Policy on Academic Dishonesty and Plagiarism (page 63 in the college catalog).

You might also find the following additional resources useful:

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   Works Cited page (Instructions & Sample) (Microsoft Word document)

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   Avoiding Plagiarism (Houghton-Mifflin web site)

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   Practice Incorporating Sources into Your Work (Houghton-Mifflin web site)

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   MLA format (Purdue university's Online Writing Lab)

Topic Selection and Preliminary Thesis: Due Tuesday, 1 Nov. (Section N1); Thursday, 27 Oct. (Section EG1)
You must establish a clear thesis before you can begin to put together a focused, well-organized, and purposeful research essay. Therefore, as your first step in the research essay assignment, you must develop and submit a clear, well-written, one-page explanation of the topic you have chosen, your reason for the selection, your focus and opinion, and a clear, well-written, explicit, and assertive preliminary thesis. This proposal may also include a preliminary idea of the plan of the paper, its intention or research question. Note: Choose your topic carefully. You will not be allowed to change your topic once you have made your selection, although you may change your position on the particular issue and will, presumably, modify your thesis during the process of research and writing.

Your work should take the following form:
Topic: the topic selected from the list provided.
Rationale: why you have chosen to research and write about this particular topic.
Focus: a narrowed form of the subject, and the issue or debate involved.
Opinion: your subjective opinion on the debate or issue.
Thesis: your opinion, worded objectively.

For example:
Topic: Assisted Suicide and Euthanasia (Note: this is not a real topic choice!)
Rationale: I selected this topic because I work in a critical care facility with many permanently disabled and even comatose patients. Many of the patients’ families have to confront this issue regularly, like whether to “pull the plug” as it were, and I am not sure how I feel about it myself..
Focus: Should physician-assisted suicide be legalized for terminally ill patients?
Opinion: I think that assisted suicide should be okay, if the person is already dying anyhow.
Thesis: Voluntary physician-assisted suicide should be a legal option for terminally ill patients, to alleviate prolonged physical and emotional suffering and to avoid unnecessary expense.

Select one of the following broad topics from your textbook. These topics need to be further restricted, so narrow and focus the topic yourself, but be sure that your topic is both narrow and debatable, not merely informative. Then, compose your assertive thesis statement, as above.

I.   Green Power:

        Climate Change (i.e., the Climate Change “Debate”)

        Preventing or Reducing Global Warming

        Alternative Energy (i.e., pro or con one form)

        Gasoline Taxes

        One of the Research Activities listed in the text (WR 369-372), or another topic of your own.*

II.  Marriage and Family in America:

        Gay Marriage

        Rights of Domestic Partners

        Are Families Dangerous?

        One of the Research Activities listed in the text (WR 455-457), or another topic of your own.*

IV. Fairy Tales (note: you may not use “Cinderella” as the basis for this essay):

        Adapting Fairy Tales (using a specific fairy tale or genre)

        Purposes and Effects (pro or con)

        One of the Research Activities listed in the text (WR 678-679), or another topic of your own.*

IV. Obedience to Authority:

        Social Pressure and “Social Media”

        “Group-Think ” and Mob Behavior: Consumerism and Fads, Christmas Shopping and Black Friday

        One of the Research Activities listed in the text (WR 753-756), or another topic of your own.*

 

*Note: students must obtain prior approval for independent topics; speak to me before or after class or email me to set up an appointment during my office hours.

Annotated Preliminary Bibliography: Due Tuesday, 22 Nov. (Sections N1 and EG1)
You must submit an  annotated preliminary bibliography with a minimum of five to seven sources, correctly cited according to MLA style. This may include up to three primary sources and a minimum of three to five secondary sources; secondary sources must be scholarly criticism or analysis, not summaries, reviews, or analysis” from sites such as Wikipedia, 123HelpMe, or Gradesaver.com; instead, use the library resources, including the available electronic databases such as Opposing Viewpoints, to locate appropriate sources. In addition to a correct citation for each source, you must include a description or summary of the source, at least one paragraph long, and an explanation of how you foresee incorporating it into your essay. For additional information on Annotated Bibliographies, see the Purdue University Online Writing Lab (OWL)’s Annotated Bibliographies, as well as “Sample Annotated Bibilography” and Ebel, Kimberly, “Class and Gender in Cinderella: Annotated Bibliography.”

You might also find the following additional resources useful:

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   MLA Documentation of Films: Works Cited and In-Text Citations

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   Works Cited page (Instructions & Sample) (Microsoft Word document)

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   MLA format (Purdue university's Online Writing Lab)

Research Paper: Due Tuesday, 6 Dec. (Section N1); Thursday, 8 Dec. (Section EG1)
The final research essay must be submitted, in its folder with all supporting materials: photocopies or printouts of all sources, preliminary thesis, preliminary bibliography, outline–if you have completed one–and any preliminary drafts. Failure to bring the required essay will result in a zero for the assignment, without opportunity for revisions.

 

Essay 4: Final Exam (In-Class Essay): “Obedience to Authority”
Tuesday, 20 Dec. (Section N1); Thursday, 15 Dec. (Section EG1)

Be sure you have carefully read Constructing Reasonable Arguments” and “Evaluating Arguments” (Rules for Writers 358-380) as well as “What Is an Argument Synthesis?” (A Writer's Resource 132-140) and “Developing and Organizing the Support for Your Arguments” (WR 170-173), in addition to all of the assigned essays on “Obedience to Authority”: The Perils of Obedience” (WR 713-723) and “Replicating Milgram: Would People Still Obey Today?” (WR 713-723), “Group Minds” (WR 723-726), The Lottery” (Handout), The Stanford Prison Experiment” (WR 732-744), and “Obedience” (WR 713-723).

Then, utilizing at least two to three of the essays, compose a well-developed, coherent, and thoughtful argument essay on one of the following topics:

Topics to be announced

Be sure to include evidence, examples, or other support from the texts, but remember that you are synthesizing ideas from the texts in support of your claim, not merely summarizing the essays, and do not copy directly from the text unless quoting. When quoting (or paraphrasing), remember to incorporate sources correctly: use appropriate signal phrases and parenthetical citations.

Your essay will, as always, be evaluated according to the Model for Evaluation of Student Writing. Therefore, make certain your essay is not only well organized and developed, but also grammatically correct, free of errors in mechanics, grammar, usage, and spelling. In addition, your essay should have an appropriate title, ideally one more creative or original than “Obedience to Authority” or, even more obvious, “Obedience to Authority: Pros and Cons.”

You may use both your textbook (or printouts) and a dictionary or thesaurus for the essay, but no additional notes or resources.

 

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