ENG 101: College Composition I
Fall
I 2011
Section 0809: Wed. 2:15-4:25 PM, Room E-107
                     Fri. 2:15-4:25 PM, Room E-260

Keys for Writers, 5 ed.Keys for Writers, 5 ed.

Brian T. Murphy

LaGuardia Community College
Schedule and Office Hours
e-mail: bmurphy@Brian-T-Murphy.com
or bmurphy@lagcc.cuny.edu

 
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Description

Objectives

Texts

Policies 

Assignments

 Grading 

Schedule

Links

Important Announcements and Updates: Click HERE
 

Print-friendly (MS Word) course outline here.
Other printable documents:
Model for Evaluation of Student Writing
 Works Cited page (Instructions & Sample)
Cover Page for Research Essays (Sample)
Revision and Editing Checklist
Paragraph Outline
Essay Outline

 

DESCRIPTION:
In this course students focus on the process of writing clear, correct and effective expository essays in response to materials drawn from culturally diverse sources. Emphasis is placed on using various methods of organization appropriate to the writer’s purpose and audience. Students are introduced to argumentation, fundamental research methods and documentation procedures. Students write frequently both in and out of class. Admission to this course is based on college placement test scores.

Prerequisite:
CSE095/099 if required, ENA/ENG/ESA099 if required, exemption or Pass on the ACT Writing and Reading Tests.

 

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OBJECTIVES:
Upon completion of English 101, students should be able to:

 

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TEXTS:
Required:

Bachmann, Susan and Melinda Barth. Between Worlds: A Reader, Rhetoric, and Handbook, 6 ed. New York: Pearson Longman, 2010 (Available used starting at $40 at Amazon.com***).

Hacker, Diana. Rules for Writers, 6 ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2009, or another current college-level handbook including 2009 MLA updates.
(Available used starting at $9.99 at Amazon.com***)

(see also Additional Textbook Options, below)

A good college-level (paperback) dictionary (Available used starting at $0.01 at Amazon.com***).

Recommended additional texts:**

Bloom, Harold. How to Read and Why. New York: Scribner, 2000. (Available starting at $1.00 at Amazon.com***)

Casagrande, June. Grammar Snobs are Great Big Meanies: A Guide to Language for Fun and Spite. New York: Penguin, 2006. (Available starting at $3.94 at Amazon.com***)

---. Mortal Syntax: 101 Language Choices That Will Get You Clobbered by the Grammar SnobsEven If You’re Right. New York: Penguin, 2008 (Available used starting at $6.61 at Amazon.com***).

Cathcart, Thomas and Daniel Klein. "Logic." Plato and a Platypus Walk into a Bar...: Understanding Philosophy Through Jokes. New York: Abrams Image, 2006. 27-49. (Available used starting at $6.73 at Amazon.com**)

---. Aristotle and an Aardvark Go to Washington: Understanding Political Doublespeak through Through Philosophy and Jokes. New York: Abrams Image, 2007. 27-49 (Available used starting at $10.85 at Amazon.com***).

Crystal, David. Words, Words, Words. New York: Oxford U P, 2006 (Available used starting at $9.28 at Amazon.com***).

Kozol, Jonathan. Letters to a Young Teacher. New York: Crown, 2007 (Available starting at $12.15 at Amazon.com***).

---.  The Shame of the Nation: The Restoration of Apartheid Schooling in America. New York: Crown, 2005 (Available starting at $10.17 at Amazon.com***).

Lazreg, Marnia. Questioning the Veil: Open Letters to Muslim Women. Princeton, NJ: Princeton UP, 2009. (Available starting at $9.98 at Amazon.com***)

Lederer, Richard. Anguished English: An Anthology of Accidental Assaults Upon Our Language. Charleston, SC: Wyrick & Company, 1987 (Available used starting at $0.01 at Amazon.com***).

---.  More Anguished English: An Expose of Embarrassing Excruciating, and Egregious Errors in English. New York: Dell, 1994 (Available used starting at $0.01 at Amazon.com***).

Truss, Lynne. Eats, Shoots & Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation. New York: Gotham Books, 2004 (Available used starting at $2.70 at Amazon.com***).

*Note: Many of the essays to be read and discussed are available online; these are indicated on the schedule (below) as hyperlinks. However, students are still strongly cautioned that they will need to purchase the textbook, both for important information and instructions on the various rhetorical modes and also for essays not available online.

** Recommended additional texts are not required purchases, and have not been ordered for the course; however, they provide—depending on the course— alternative readings, historical and cultural backgrounds, criticism, personal literary responses, or entertaining (irreverent, possibly sacrilegious) revisions. Students who find themselves becoming deeply interested in one or more of the required readings may find these interesting and/or useful. When indicated with a dagger (†), texts are only provisionally recommended, as I have not read these works yet, although they have received excellent reviews or recommendations.

*** Prices listed at Amazon.com do not include shipping, and are accurate as of original posting date only; no guarantees of prices or availability are express or implied§.

 

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CLASS POLICIES:
Attendance:
Departmental policy allows no more than four (4) hours of unexcused absences in ENG 101. Students who do not meet the English Department’s attendance policy will not pass the class.

Students must not only attend every class, but also arrive on time, be prepared, and take an active part in c
lass (see Participation, below). Moreover, once students get to class, they are expected to stay in the classroom until the class is over. Leaving class early or getting up in the middle of class is considered disruptive behavior and should happen only in extreme emergencies. Students may be required to sign in each class session to verify their attendance. Students unable to attend class should contact the instructor regarding their absence in advance or as soon as they return to school.

Plagiarism and Cheating:
Plagiarism includes copying or paraphrasing another’s words, ideas, or facts without crediting the source; submitting a paper written by someone else, either in whole or in part, as one’s own work; or submitting work previously submitted for another course or instructor. Plagiarism, cheating, or other forms of academic dishonesty on any assignment will result in failure (a grade of zero) for that assignment and may result in further disciplinary action, including but not limited to failure for the course and expulsion from the College. See the English Department’s Statement on Plagiarism and the LaGuardia Community College Policy on Academic Integrity (.pdf).

Homework/Essay Submission:
All writing assignments must be received by the instructor on or before the due date, by the beginning of the class period, as indicated on the schedule, below. Late work will not be accepted. All essays and work completed at home must be typed (in 12-point Times New Roman font), double-spaced, and stapled when submitted; essays will not be accepted via email.

Revisions:
All failing essays, with the exception of the Diagnostic Essay and Final Essay, must be corrected and revised within one week of the day graded essays are returned. Essays receiving a passing grade may also be revised for a better grade, but only after the student has met with the instructor during office hours (by appointment only) to discuss revisions. Revisions must be substantially revised, not merely “corrected” versions of the original essay (revisions should be based upon the Revising and Editing Checklist and relevant information from class and the textbooks), and must be submitted with the original graded essay and the departmental Evaluation of Essays form attached. Evidence of substantial revision may result in a better grade for the assignment. 

If you did not submit a completed essay on time, you will receive a grade of zero and may not submit a “revision.”

Make-up Exams/Late Work:
All assignment deadlines and scheduled exam dates are provided at the beginning of the semester; therefore, late papers will not be accepted, nor will make-up exams be offered, except under extraordinary circumstances with appropriate documentation. Excuses such as “crashed computers,” “lost flash drives,” or “empty printer ink cartridges” will not be accepted. It is suggested that all computer work be saved both on your computer’s hard drive and again on removable storage device.

 

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ASSIGNMENTS:
Attendance and Participation (5 points):
As this class will combine both lecture and discussion, students are expected both to attend every session and to take an active part in class—joining in discussions and raising questions. Discussion is one of the best ways to clarify your understandings and to test your conclusions. Open discussion always involves personal exposure, and thus the taking of risks: your ideas may not be the same as your fellow students’ or even the instructor’s. Yet as long as your points are honest and supportable, they will be respected by all of us in the classroom. Questions, discussion, disagreement, and laughter are all encouraged in this class.

Quizzes and Exercises (5 points total):
With the exception of the first day, class may begin with a short (five- minute) quiz on the readings for the day, at the instructor’s discretion. Quizzes cannot be made up; if you miss a quiz due to absence or lateness, that grade will be regarded as a 0. At the end of the semester, the lowest quiz grade will be dropped. Exercises reviewing essential grammar and/or writing skills may also be assigned, to be completed in class, or to be done online as homework and submitted electronically.

Total number of exercises and quizzes during the semester will determine the point value of each; that is, if eleven quizzes and exercises are given (lowest quiz grade will be dropped), each is worth up to one-half point.

In-Class Writing and Homework (5 points total):
Students may also complete various shorter in-class writing assignments during the semester, including short summaries, mini-essays, and response papers, or similar short assignments to be completed as homework. Total number of assignments during the semester will determine the point value of each; that is, if 10 assignments are required, each is worth up to one full point.

Diagnostic Essay (ungraded):
Students will complete an in-class Diagnostic Essay at the beginning of  the semester on
a topic provided; this essay will be evaluated and returned, but will not receive a grade, nor will it affect your final average.

Essays (5 @ 12 points):
Students will complete  five (5) expository essays during the semester, including an in-class Midterm Essay and Final Essay, the remainder to be completed at home.
For each, a topic or list of topic choices will be provided. Essays must be on one of the assigned topics or they will receive grades of “F”. Essays must be at least six hundred (600) words, free of errors in mechanics, grammar, usage, and spelling, and follow the appropriate format: at-home work must be typed (in 12-point Times New Roman font), double-spaced, and stapled when submitted, while in-class work must be neatly printed in blue or black ink on composition paper or in bluebooks provided by the instructor and double-spaced. Essays will be evaluated according to the departmental Evaluation of Essays form;  as per the English Department’s policy, all students must receive a passing grade on at least one draft of each essay (not including the Diagnostic) to pass English 101.

Research Paper (25 points total):
The fourth required at-home essay will be an argumentative (persuasive) Research Paper of at least six pages (at least 1500 words), using a minimum of three to five primary or secondary sources, correctly documented utilizing MLA format. Specific points will be accrued as follows:

Topic Selection and Preliminary Thesis (2.5 points):
Before beginning the research essay assignment, students will develop and submit a one-page research essay proposal for approval. This must include the topic chosen (from the list provided), as well as a specific reason for the selection,  the issue or debate involved, a personal opinion on the debatable issue, and a clear, well-written, explicit, and assertive preliminary thesis statement.

Annotated Bibliography (2.5 points):
Students will develop and submit an annotated bibliography for the research essay assignment, with a minimum of five to seven sources, correctly documented according to MLA format.

Research Paper: Preliminary Draft (5 points):
Students will complete a preliminary draft of their completed research essay for evaluation and comments.

Research Paper: Final Draft (15 points):
The final draft of the research paper must be submitted in a folder, including copies of all sources used and all of the above assignments associated with the research paper. As per the English Department’s policy, all students must receive a passing grade for the research essay to pass English 101.

Extra Credit (various opportunities, at 12 points each):
Students will be notified of opportunities for extra credit, including attendance at various cultural events related to the class. If students attend one or more of these events, and provide evidence of attendance (ticket stub, program, et cetera) along with a typed one- to two-page personal response  (review, analysis, reflection, critique, et cetera), they can receive up to two points per event added to their final average. Recommended Fieldtrip/Extra Credit opportunities offered thus far include:

2011 Latino Heritage Celebration Events:

An interview and Q&A with Felipe Luciano
Wednesday, October 5th
11:45am–1:00pm
The Little Theater
Activist, award-winning journalist, radio and television personality Felipe Luciano is interviewed by Professor Victor Rosa;
An opportunity is provided for audience members to ask Mr. Luciano questions. 

The NuyoRican School Poetry Jazz Ensemble, Inc.
Wednesday, October 5th
1:00pm–2:00pm
The Little Theater
Americo Casiano, Gene Golden, Barbara Jones, Edy Martinez, Ray Martinez, Louis Reyes Rivera, and Grammy Award winner, Dave Valentin

Readings from the novels of Angie Cruz
Tuesday, October 11th
1:00pm–2:30pm
Poolside Café
Award-winning writer Angie Cruz reads from her novels Soledad & Let it Rain Coffee, discusses her career path with an opportunity for a    Q&A.  A “Kindle” reader will be raffled off.

Short Takes on Literature
Thursday afternoons 2:30
4:00 pm

Join students, faculty and staff and community fans of literature in the Library Conference Room for discussions of short stories
that will surprise and entertain. Share good stories, cookies, conversation and ideas. All Welcome!

Access to story selections will be available approximately one week prior to each session at the Library Reference Desk.
For additional information please contact Marie Cimino Spina at mspina@lagcc.cuny.edu.
This program is sponsored by the Library and Media Resources Center of LaGuardia Community College

October 6:
Mavis Gallant and  Amy Bloom

Madeline’s Birthday and A Day Like Any Other” from The Cost of Living
Silver Water from Come to Me: Stories

October 13:
Lorrie Moore
Four Calling Birds, Three French Hens and Which Is More than I Can Say about Some People” from Birds of America

October 20:
Toni Cade Bambara and Eudora Welty
My Man Bovanne and No Place For You My Love from We Are the Stories We Tell

October 27:
 Alice Monro and Joyce Carol Oates
Free Radicals from Too Much Happiness
Pumpkin Head from New Yorker 12 Jan. 2009

November 3:
 Louise Erdrich and Leslie Marmon Silko, Hayat Bin al-Shaykh and Luo Shu Fleur
Yellow Woman from We Are the Stories We Tell and from Arab Women Writers: An Anthology
Aunt Lui from Wayward Girls and Wicked Women

November 10:
 Anna Maria Ortese & Gina Lagoria andGrazia Deledda
The Tree and Tosca’s Cats from New Italian Women: A Collection of Short Fiction
Baptisms from Unspeakable Women

November 17:
 Margaret Atwood & Alice Walker
Giving Birth and The Abortion from We Are the Stories We Tell

December 1:
Alice Monro & Tama Janowitz & Amy Bloom
Fiction from Too Much Happiness and Slaves of New York from We Are The Stories We Tell
Love Is Not a Pie from Come to Me: Stories

Library Citation Clinics
(for students working on research assignments
)

When: Drop in anytime during any of these two-hour sessions:

●   Tuesday, November 22, 1:003:00pm
●   Wednesday, November 30, 9:30
11:30pm
●   Tuesday, December 6, 5:30
7:30pm

Where:  Library Lab (E101-B)
No Appointment Necessary
Questions? Contact, Alexandra Rojas, arojas@lagcc.cuny.edu, x6020,
or Catherine Stern, castern@lagcc.cuny.edu, x 6021

Refworks 2.0 Workshop
(for students, faculty, and staff)
Refworks has changed and this workshop will guide new or nearly new users through the basics of Refworks 2.0.

When: Two upcoming sessions:

●   Monday, November 14, 2:30–3: 30pm
●   Tuesday, November 29, 11:00pm–12:00
noon

Where:  Library Lab, E101-B

Belief in Polyculturalism:
Rethinking Borders versus Connections Between Cultures
Psychology Club present special guest speaker Dr. Lisa Rosenthal, Post-Doctoral Fellow, Yale University

Polyculturalism is the belief that all racial and ethnic groups have throughout history interacted, exchanged ideas, and influenced each others’ cultures, and continue to do so today. So what happens when people believe in polyculturalism, and focus on the mutual influences and connections among cultures? This talk will present the results of several studies with diverse adults and college students that have demonstrated that people who believe more in polyculturalism have more positive social, academic, and health outcomes.

Wednesday, November 16
4:30-6:30

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GRADING:
Final average will be calculated as follows:

Attendance and Class Participation

5 points

Quizzes and Exercises

5 points

In-Class Writing/Homework

5 points

Diagnostic Essay

(ungraded)

 Essays (5 @ 12 points)
[includes Midterm and Final]

60 points

Research Paper:

 
   Topic Selection and Thesis

2.5 points

   Annotated Bibliography 2.5 points
   Research Paper Draft

5 points

   Final Research Paper Draft

15 points

Total

100 points

Extra Credit (if any) will be added to the final total.

 

Total Points earned (Final Average) will determine the grade received for the course, as follows:

Total Points

Final Percentage

Final Grade

90-100+

90-100

A

85-89

85-89

  B+

80-84

80-84

B

75-79

75-79

  C+

70-74

70-74

C

60-69

60-69

D

0-59

0-59

F

NOTE: Students must receive a passing grade on at least one draft of all essays, excluding the
diagnostic but including the research essay and the final essay, in order to pass English 101.

 

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OUTLINE:
Projected Schedule of Readings and Assignments

Important Dates: FALL SEMESTER 2011 SESSION I

Friday Sept. 2 Start of the Fall Semester - Faculty returns
Monday Sept. 5 No Classes
Thursday Sept. 8 First Day of Weekday Fall Classes – Session I
Saturday Sept. 10 First Day of Saturday Fall Classes - Session I
Sunday Sept. 11 First Day of Sunday Fall Classes- Session I
Tuesday Sept. 13 Last Day to Add a Course or Change a Course Section
Friday Sept. 23 Commencement - No Day or Evening Classes
Tuesday Sept. 27 Last Day to: Drop a Course (Census Day)
September 28 Irregular Day - Friday Classes Meet
September 29 - 30 No Classes
October 7 - 10 No Classes
Tuesday Oct. 25 Last Day to officially withdraw from a course ("W" grade)
Tuesday Nov. 8 No Classes
Wednesday Nov. 23 Irregular Day - Classes follow a Friday schedule
November 24 - 27 No Classes
Saturday Dec. 10 Last Day of Saturday Classes
Sunday Dec. 11 Last Day of Sunday Classes
Monday Dec. 12 Last Day Weekday Classes
Irregular Day - Classes follow a Wednesday schedule
Tuesday Dec. 13 Reading Day
December 14 - 20 Final Examinations

See Academic Calendar    

Note: All readings below are required, and must be completed by the day indicated; the only exceptions are those indicated with an asterisk (*), which are recommended additional readings or resources.

Readings from Between Worlds (BW) are identified below by author and title as well as page numbers, e.g.,  Hwang, “The Good Daughter” (BW 12-15); or by chapter number and title with page numbers, e.g. BW 13: Writing the Research Paper (540-554).  Readings from  Rules for Writers are identified below by title and page numbers, e.g., “Documenting Sources (Rules 426-463). Specific assignments identified as (HW) are intended as homework, and should be completed and submitted by the due dates listed on the schedule. Additional readings, including material from Rules for Writers or Between Worlds Part III: The Handbook, covering grammar and style, may also be assigned.

Red text indicates due dates or links to assignments; Blue text indicates links to assignments, resources, or online versions of texts (Note: While every effort is made to verify the accuracy and usefulness of these links and their contents, no guarantees are made. Please notify me of any broken or outdated links at bmurphy@Brian-T-Murphy.com).

Note: This schedule is subject to revision according to scheduling of a library orientation, the Academic Calendar for the semester, school closings due to inclement weather or other reasons, the instructor’s discretion, and the progress of the class. Additions or changes will be announced in class, and they will also be posted here as well as on the class Announcements page.

 

Week:

Dates:

Readings  and Assignments:

1
Thursday,
8 Sept.
First Day of Weekday Fall Classes – Session I
(Class does NOT meet)
Friday,
9 Sept.
Course Introduction: Syllabus, texts, policies, assignments
Diagnostic Essay
2 Wednesday,
14 Sept.
“Generating Ideas...”  and “Roughing Out an Initial Draft” (Rules 1-27);
BW 7: “Getting Started...Now!” (329-350);
BW 8: “Organizing and Drafting an Essay” (351-380)
Friday,
16 Sept.

Part I: The Reader, including Goodman, “Thanksgiving” (BW 1-6)

*See also, Sample research schedule (.pdf);
 Guide to Locating and Documenting Internet Sources;
 CAT Scan (Credibility, Accuracy, and Timeliness)

3 Wednesday,
21 Sept.

Topic Selection and Preliminary Thesis Due
   Word document here.
   Rich-Text Format (.rtf) version here
   Microsoft Works 6.0 (.wps) version here

Note:  Works 6.0 does not support the fill-in field function.

Note:  If Works does not open the document automatically, right-click on the
link, then select “Save Target As...”. Save it to your computer, then
open it as you normally would.

Hwang, “The Good Daughter” (BW 12-15);
In-class writing assignment

*See also, some interesting comments about Hwang and “The Good Daughter here.

Friday,
23 Sept.
Commencement - No Day or Evening Classes: Class does NOT meet
4 Wednesday,
28 Sept.

Irregular Day - Classes follow a Friday schedule
(Class DOES meet: Room E-260)

Essay 1 Due: See Class Announcements page

BW 9: Revising an Essay (381-403)
“Making global revisions; then revising sentences” (Rules 27-39)

Repair Sentence Fragments” and “Repair Run-On Sentence” (Rules 148-156,156-164);
Online exercises: Sentence Fragments; Comma Splices and Fused Sentences (HW)
Note: Do not attempt these online exercises until we have discussed the assignment in class.

Friday,
30 Sept.

No classes: Class does NOT meet

5 Wednesday,
5 Oct.

Essay 1 to be returned

“Documenting Sources (Rules 426-463); “Documenting the Research Paper: MLA Style” in BW 13: Writing the Research Paper (540-554)

*See also, More on avoiding plagiarism;
 Practice incorporating sources into your work;
 MLA Documentation Style for “Works Cited";
;
  and for an opposing viewpoint,  Kurt Schick,“Citation Obsession? Get Over It!

Ehrenreich, “Are Families Dangerous? (a.k.a. ‘Oh, Those Family Values’)” (BW 37-41)

Note: a five-minute quiz on Ehrenreich at the start of class is a distinct possibility!

*See also, “Hell Is For Children” by Pat Benatar: Video (YouTube)/lyrics

Friday,
7 Oct.

No classes: Class does NOT meet

6 Wednesday,
12 Oct.

Essay 1 Revisions Due

Tighten Wordy Sentences,”Choose Appropriate Language,” and “Find the Exact Words  (Rules 123-145)

In-Class Exercise: Diction

Online exercises: Word Choice, Words Commonly Confused, and Sexist Language (HW)

*See also,  Shea, Ammon. “Vocabulary Size.” New York Times Magazine 14 March 2010: 14.
                     http://www.nytimes.com/2010/03/14/magazine/14FOB-onlanguage-t.html?ref=magazine.

Friday,
14 Oct.
Essay 2 Due

Holman, “Mr. Z” (BW 133-134); Arboleda, “Race is a Four-Letter Word” (BW 120-124)

*See also,  Practice Quiz on "Race Is a Four-Letter Word"
  Yasmine Bahrani, “Why Does My Race Matter?
  Susan Saulny, “
For Mixed Family Old Racial Tensions Remain Part of Life.”
       New York Times Online
. 12 Oct. 2011. Web
  Time magazine special issue: The Changing Face of America (18 Nov. 1993), including
  “America's Immigrant Challenge,” “Intermarried...with Children,” and much more.

7 Wednesday,
19 Oct.
Issa and Al-Marayati, “An Identity Reduced to a Burka” (BW 124-129)

Repair Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers” (Rules 96-104);
Make Pronouns and Antecedents Agree,”Make Pronoun References Clear,”
Distinguish between Pronouns,” and “Distinguish between who and whom (Rules 175-97)

Online exercises: Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers,
Pronoun Agreement, Reference, and Point of View (HW)

*See also,  Schmidgall, Gary. A Counter-Veiling Manifesto.” (Rev. of Marnia Lazreg's Questioning the Veil:
      Open Letters to Muslim Women
). CUNY Matters Nov.-Dec. 2009: 19. Print. (also 
here in .pdf)
Feminist Majority Foundation
Muslim Women's League

Friday,
21 Oct.
Annotated Preliminary Bibliography Due

Citing Sources; avoiding plagiarism and Integrating Sources” (Rules 382-426);
Incorporating Sources assignment (HW)

Library Research Orientation, 3:25–4:25, E-101 (Room E-101-B)

*See also, More on avoiding plagiarism;
 Practice incorporating sources into your work;
 MLA Documentation Style for “Works Cited”

8 Wednesday,
26 Oct.
“MLA manuscript format; sample paper” (Rules 463-475);
BW 13: Writing the Research Paper (509-523)
Friday,
28 Oct.
Annotated Preliminary Bibliography Due

Essay 3: Midterm Exam (In-Class Essay)

9 Wednesday,
2 Nov.
Student Example: Research Paper (Paaske, “From Access to Acceptance: Enabling America’s Largest Minority”) (BW 524-539)

In-Class Exercise: Paaske (also here in Rich-Text Format)

Friday,
4 Nov.
Ortiz Cofer, “The Myth of the Latin Woman” (in .PDF) (BW 172-178)

*See also,   Don't Cry for Me, Argentina” from Evita
Maria” from West Side Story
La Bamba” by Los Lobos  (music video featuring scenes from La Bamba,
     with Lou Diamond Philips as Ritchie Valens)

Homework: Works Cited Practice
(also here in rich-text format, or here in Microsoft Works format)

*See also, Works Cited page (Instructions & Sample) (MS Word document)
 More on avoiding plagiarism;
 MLA Documentation Style for “Works Cited”

10 Wednesday,
9 Nov.

Balance Parallel Ideas,”  “Add Needed Words,” and “Untangle Mixed Constructions”  (Rules 84-96); Spelling” (Rules 327-336)
Also: Prefer Active Verbs,” Make Subjects and Verbs Agree,” and
Choose Appropriate Verb Forms...” (Rules 80-83, 164-175, 203-222)
 

Online exercises: Parallelism, Spelling, Subject-Verb Agreement (HW)

*See also,  What Are the Most Often Misspelled Words?

 Frequently Misspelled Words,  “Spell Check Poem” and The Spell Checker Poem

 “Garbage In, Garbage Out: Errors Caused by Spell-Checking

 “Don’t Computers Make Spelling Instruction Unnecessary?” (in Malatesha Joshi, et al.
 “How Words Cast Their Spell: Spelling Is an Integral Part of Learning the Language,
 Not a Matter of Memorization.American Educator: A  Quarterly Journal of Educational
Research  and Ideas
32.4  (Winter 2008-09): 6-16, 42.
http://www.aft.org/pubs-reports/american_educator/issues/winter08_09/joshi.pdf.

and for parellelism:  “I Have a Dream” by Martin Luther King, Jr.

Friday,
11 Nov.
Essay 4 Due

Staples, “Black Men and Public Space” (BW 181-186); In-class writing assignment

*See also,  Jan, Tracy. “Harvard Professor Gates Arrested at Cambridge Home.” Boston Globe 20 Jul 2009.
        http://www.boston.com/news/local/breaking_news/2009/07/harvard.html

 Podhoretz, Norman. My Negro Problem - And Ours.” Commentary Feb. 1963: 93-101.
 Santos, Fernanda and Michael Wilson. City Councilman Jumaane D. Williams Is Handcuffed at
        West Indian Day Parade
.” New York Times 5 Sep. 2011. http://www.nytimes.com/2011/09/06/
        nyregion/city-councilman-jumaane-d-williams-is-handcuffed-at-west-indian-day-parade.html
.

“Punctuation and “Mechanics (Rules 269-344)

Online exercises: CommasApostrophes, Quotation Marks, Underlining, and Italics, and
Other Punctuation (Period, Question Mark, Exclamation Mark, Semicolon, Colon) (
HW)

11 Wednesday,
16 Nov.
Coleman, “Discrimination at Large” (BW 198-201) (also here as .pdf)

In-class writing assignment; see instructions here (Microsoft Word document); also here in rich-text format, or here in Microsoft Works format.

Friday,
18 Nov.
Research Paper: Preliminary Draft Due
12 Wednesday,
23 Nov.
Irregular Day - Classes follow a Friday schedule
(Class DOES meet, but in our Friday room)

Last day to submit late or missing online exercises

Tavris, “In Groups We Shrink” (BW 261-264) (also here as .pdf)

*See also,  Burger, Jerry M. “Replicating Milgram: Would People Still Obey Today?” (Word
      document; also here as .pdf);
The Experiment. Dir. Paul Schereung. Perf. Adrien Brody and Forest Whitacker. Stage 6
      Films/Sony Pictures Home Entertainment, 2010;
Lessing, Doris. “Group Minds”;
Milgram, Stanley. “The Perils of Obedience” (also here, or here and here as .pdf);
The Stanford Prison Experiment”;
Zimbardo, Philip G.
The Stanford Prison Experiment (website with slide show,
      embedded videos, discussion questions, bibliography and additional links)

Friday,
25 Nov.

No classes: Class does NOT meet

13 Wednesday,
30 Nov.
King, “Three Ways of Meeting Oppression” (BW 279-282) (also here in Word)
Note: Online text is missing the last paragraph from our book!
Friday,
2 Dec.
Research Paper Revision Due
See also, Research Paper Folder Checklist

In-Class Writing: Practice Essay 1

14 Wednesday,
7 Dec.
In-Class Writing: Practice Essay 2;
Last day to submit any late or missing work.
Friday,
9 Dec.
Last Day of Class
Essay 5: Final Exam (In-Class Essay)
Research Paper Final (optional) Revision Due
  Tuesday,
13 Dec.
Reading Day: No Classes
Wednesday,
14 Dec.
Class DOES meet:
Course wrap-up, Final conferences
Friday,
16 Dec.

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TOPICS:

For each of the assigned essays and projects, a topic or list of topic choices is provided. Your work must be on one of the assigned topics for that assignment or developed in consultation with the instructor, or it will receive a grade of “F”. All work must be submitted on or before the due date, by the beginning of the class period; late work will not be accepted. Failure to bring the required essay will result in a zero for the assignment, without opportunity for revisions.

For each of the essays, select one of the topics to discuss in a well-developed, coherent, and thoughtful essay. Be sure to focus carefully on the topic, and remember that these are formal essays: they must have an appropriate, original title; contain an introduction, body, and conclusion; have a clear, explicit, assertive, objectively worded thesis statement (thesis statements must be underlined); and (unless otherwise indicated) avoid use of I or you throughout.

Essays one through five must be at least six hundred words; the Research Essay must be at least 1500 words (roughly six pages minimum). All at-home work must be typed (in 12-point Times New Roman font, double-spaced, and stapled when submitted. In-class work must be neatly printed in blue or black ink on composition paper or in bluebooks provided by the instructor and double-spaced§. All essays should be grammatically correct, free of errors in mechanics, grammar, usage, spelling, and documentation, and will be evaluated according to the departmental Evaluation of Essays form. See Getting an A on an English Paper as well as the Essay Outline and Revising and Editing Checklist for additional assistance.

Please refer to the following as well:

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   Formatting and Style Guide (Purdue Online Writing Lab)

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   Incorporating Sources (class handout)

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   Class Plagiarism Policy (on syllabus), as well as the English Department’s Statement on Plagiarism (.pdf, also distributed in class) and the LaGuardia Community College Policy on Academic Integrity (.pdf).

You might also find the following additional resources useful:

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   Works Cited page (Instructions & Sample) (Microsoft Word document)

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   Avoiding Plagiarism (Houghton-Mifflin web site)

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   Practice Incorporating Sources into Your Work (Houghton-Mifflin web site)

ball2.gif (137 bytes)   MLA format (Purdue University's Online Writing Lab)

Also, one would think that this would not even need to be stated, but read the essay or essays about which you are writing, and read them carefully! Do not rely upon your general impressions based on what you think was said in class, or on what you read online. There is no reason for your essays to contain factual errors about the works.

Please feel free to communicate any concerns or questions to me before the essays are due; I will be available to meet with any student who needs assistance or additional instruction. Please speak to me before or after class or email me to set up an appointment during my office hours.

§ On format, handwriting, and neatness, see Chase, Clinton I. “Essay Test Scoring: Interaction of Relevant Variables.” Journal of Educational Measurement 23.1 (1986): 33-41 and Marshall, Jon C. and Jerry M. Powers. “Writing Neatness, Composition Errors, and Essay Grades.” Journal of Educational Measurement 6.2 (1988): 306-324.

 

Diagnostic Essay: Friday, 9 September
Select one of the following topics, and compose a formal essay. Your essay will not receive a grade, nor will it affect your final average; this is for evaluative purposes only. You will have approximately one hour to complete this essay.

    1.  What is the American Dream? Is the American Dream accessible for everyone in the United States? Why or why not?.

    2.  Who is left out of or marginalized by American society? How do people gain “admission” to American society?.

 

Essay 1: Due  Wednesday, 28 September
Revisions due Wednesday, 12 October

After reading “Thanksgiving” by Ellen Goodman (BW 3-5), select one of the following topics, and compose a well-developed, coherent, and thoughtful essay of at least 600 words. In either case, use specific examples to support your main idea; you may draw upon your own experience, but remember that these are formal essays: avoid use of I or you throughout.

    1.  In “Thanksgiving,” Ellen Goodman discusses the American tradition of Thanksgiving. Select another culture’s celebration that is
         comparable to Thanksgiving in its emphasis on family and togetherness, and compare or contrast the two holidays. How are they
         alike, and/or how do they differ?

    2.  In her essay, Goodman states that we are both “a part of and apart from” our families, that we are, in essence, “between worlds.”
         Select a specific group in American society—one based on age, ethnicity, or any other single defining characteristic—and explain
         how members of that group are also both “a part of and apart from” our culture, or “between worlds.” 

Note: This is not a research essay. Information about another culture’s celebration should be either common knowledge or based on your own experience. Therefore do not attempt the first topic if you do not have personal experience or knowledge of another culture. Also, the essay must compare or contrast the American (U.S.) celebration of Thanksgiving with another, different holiday—not Thanksgiving in another country, but another holiday that still emphasizes family, togetherness, and possibly food and/or travel. The celebration must also be unique or particular to its culture; in most cases, religious holidays such as Christmas and Easter are not appropriate, as they are cross-cultural celebrations. Similarly, do not conduct research on a group in American culture for the second topic; all information should be either common knowledge or based on your own experience.

 

Essay 2: Due Friday, 14 October
The essays we have read thus far—Goodman, “Thanksgiving” (BW 3-5); Hwang, “The Good Daughter” (BW 12-15); and Ehrenreich, “Are Families Dangerous?”  (37-41)all address the issue of family: not merely the potential advantages, but also the pressures, problems, obligations, and expectations. Compose a well-developed, coherent, and thoughtful essay of at least 600 words in which you argue either that family problems outweigh the benefits, or the reverse, that the advantages are greater than the difficulties. You must use specific examples from one or more of the texts to support your main idea; you may draw upon your own experience, but remember that these are formal essays: avoid use of I or you throughout. A finished, typed draft is due in class on Wednesday, October 15. Failure to bring the required essay will result in a zero for the assignment, without opportunity for revisions.

 

Essay 3: Midterm Exam (In-Class Essay): Friday, 28 October
Topics to be announced.
You will have two hours to write an essay of at least six hundred (600) words, on one of the following topics. Before you begin to write, take time to plan your essay carefully. Essays should focus on the selected topic and contain a clear beginning (an introduction, with a thesis), a middle (the body paragraphs), and end (conclusion), and use appropriate topic sentences and transitions to guide the reader. Be sure to include evidence, examples, or other support for your assertions; the more support you include, the stronger and more convincing your essay will be. You may include your own ideas or examples, but you must include evidence from the text you are discussing. Remember that you are not summarizing the essay, but responding to it in a critical manner, and do not copy directly from the textbook unless quoting. When quoting, remember to incorporate sources correctly: use signal phrases and document with parenthetical citations.

Your essay will, as always, be evaluated in terms of Main Idea, Organization, Support, and Mechanics (Words and Sentences), using the standard Evaluation of Essays form. Therefore, make certain your essay is not only well organized and developed, but also grammatically correct, free of errors in mechanics, grammar, usage, and spelling.

You may use both your book and a dictionary during this exam.

 

Essay 4: Due Friday, 11 November
Both Shannon Paaske, in “From Access to Acceptance: Enabling America’s Largest Minority” (BW 524-539) and Judith Ortiz Cofer, in “The Myth of the Latin Woman” (BW 172-178) suggest that American society still perpetuates discrimination and oppression against the disabled or Hispanic women, respectively. Focusing on one of the two authors, write an essay in which you argue in favor of or against the author’s claims or assertions. Be sure to include direct quotations from the essay and well-reasoned support for your claims. Failure to bring the required essay to class will result in a zero for the assignment, without opportunity for revisions.

If you feel it is absolutely necessary for your essay, you may use additional sources besides Paaske or Ortiz Cofer. However, if you do use additional sources, they must be reliable or authoritative, such as articles from reputable newspapers or journals or scholarly criticism, not summaries, reviews, or analysis” from sites such as Wikipedia, 123HelpMe, or Gradesaver.com; instead, use the library (CUNY Plus) or the available databases such as Academic Search Complete or LexisNexis to locate appropriate sources. Finally, all sources must be correctly documented.

 

Research Paper: Due in stages, including two drafts (with optional additional revision)
Compose a clear, well-written, properly documented (MLA format) argumentative essay of at least 1250-1500 words (roughly five pages minimum), with a clear, explicit, and assertive thesis statement. Essays must use a minimum of three to five reputable critical or scholarly sources, and these references should be used to support your assertions and be properly documented (utilizing MLA format). See also, Research Paper checklist.

Topic Selection and Preliminary Thesis: Due Wednesday, 21 September
You must establish a clear thesis before you can begin to put together a focused, well-organized, and purposeful research essay. Therefore, as your first step in the research essay assignment, you must develop and submit a clear, well-written, one-page explanation of the topic you have chosen, your reason for the selection, your focus and opinion, and a clear, well-written, explicit, and assertive preliminary thesis. This proposal may also include a preliminary idea of the plan of the paper, its intention or research question, Note: Choose your topic carefully. You will not be allowed to change your topic once you have made your selection, although you may change your position on the particular issue and will, presumably, modify your thesis during the process of research and writing.

Your work should take the following form:
Topic: the topic selected from the list provided.
Rationale: why you have chosen to research and write about this particular topic.
Focus: a narrowed form of the subject, and the issue or debate involved.
Opinion: your subjective opinion on the debate or issue.
Thesis: your opinion, worded objectively.

For example:
Topic: Assisted Suicide and Euthanasia (Note: this is not a real topic choice!)
Rationale: I selected this topic because I work in a critical care facility with many permanently disabled and even comatose patients. Many of the patients’ families have to confront this issue regularly, like whether to “pull the plug
as it were, and I am not sure how I feel about it myself..
Focus: Should physician-assisted suicide be legalized for terminally ill patients?
Opinion: I think that assisted suicide should be okay, if the person is already dying anyhow.
Thesis: Voluntary physician-assisted suicide should be a legal option for terminally ill patients, to alleviate prolonged physical and emotional suffering and to avoid unnecessary expense.

Select one of the following broad topics, many connected to or loosely based on essays we are reading this semester. These topics need to be further restricted, so narrow and focus the topic yourself; then, compose your assertive thesis statement, as above.

I.   Race or Gender:

        Affirmative Action

        Gender or racial biases in American education or in a specific industry

II.  Marriage and Family in America:

        Gay Marriage

        Rights of Domestic Partners

        Are Families Dangerous?

        Alternative or Non-Traditional Family Structures

III.  Science and Technology:

        Social Networking

        Cyber Harassment/Bullying

        Climate Change (i.e., the Climate Change “Debate”)

        Alternative Energy (i.e., pro or con one form)

IV. Education:

        Economic, gender, or racial biases in American education

        School voucher programs

        Teaching Intelligent Design in public schools

V. Society, Individual Rights, and Obedience to Authority:

        Compulsory military (or alternate) service

        Government “wire-tapping

        Social Pressure and “Social Media”

        “Group-Think ” and Mob Behavior

VI.  A debatable topic of your own, developed in consultation with the instructor, but not Abortion, the Death Penalty, Animal Experimentation, or any other subject that has been done to death. Note: students must obtain prior approval for independent topics; speak to me before or after class or set up an appointment during my office hours.

Annotated Preliminary Bibliography: Due Friday, 21 October Friday, 28 October
You must submit an  annotated preliminary bibliography with a minimum of five to seven sources, correctly cited according to MLA style. This may include up to three primary sources and a minimum of three to five secondary sources; secondary sources must be scholarly criticism or analysis, not summaries, reviews, or analysis” from sites such as Wikipedia, 123HelpMe, or Gradesaver.com; instead, use the library (CUNY Plus) or the available databases such as Academic Search Complete or LexisNexis to locate appropriate sources. In addition to a correct citation for each source, you must include a description or summary of the source, at least one paragraph long, and an explanation of how you foresee incorporating it into your essay. For additional information on Annotated Bibliographies, see the Purdue University Online Writing Lab (OWL)’s Annotated Bibliographies, as well as “Sample Annotated Bibliography” and Ebel, Kimberly, “Class and Gender in Cinderella: Annotated Bibliography.”

Research Paper: Preliminary Draft: Due Friday, 18 November
Compose a clear, well-written, properly documented (MLA format) argumentative essay of at least 1500 words (roughly six pages minimum), with a clear, explicit, and assertive thesis statement, on the topic you previously selected, utilizing the thesis statement and sources from the preliminary annotated bibliography already submitted (see above). Essays must use a minimum of three to five reputable critical or scholarly sources, and these references should be used to support your assertions and be properly documented (utilizing MLA format). You must bring a typed, finished draft of your research essay in class for peer review. Failure to bring the required essay will result in a zero for the assignment, without opportunity for revisions. See also, Research Paper checklist.

Note: Additional materials (photocopies or printouts of sources, preliminary thesis, preliminary bibliography, and outline–if you have completed one) do not have to be submitted at this time, but must be submitted with the revisions, below.

Research Paper: Revision: Due Friday, 2 December
A revised research essay must be submitted, in its folder with all supporting materials: photocopies or printouts of all sources, preliminary thesis, preliminary bibliography, outline—if you have completed one—and peer-reviewed draft. Failure to bring the required essay will result in a zero for the assignment, without opportunity for revisions.

Practice Essay 1 (In-Class Essay): Friday, 2 December
Topics to be announced.
You will have approximately two hours to write an essay of at least six hundred (600) words, on one of the topics provided. Before you begin to write, take time to plan your essay carefully. Essays should focus on the selected topic and contain a clear beginning (an introduction, with a thesis statement, underlined), a middle (the body paragraphs), and end (conclusion), and use appropriate topic sentences and transitions to guide the reader.

Be sure to include evidence, examples, or other support for your assertions; the more support you include, the stronger and more convincing your essay will be. You may include your own ideas or examples, but you must include evidence from the text(s) you are discussing, as well. Remember that you are not summarizing the essay, but responding to it in a critical manner, and do not copy directly from the textbook unless quoting.

Your essay will, as always, be evaluated in terms of Main Idea, Organization, Support, and Mechanics (Words and Sentences), using the standard Evaluation of Essays form. Therefore, make certain your essay is not only well organized and developed, but also grammatically correct, free of errors in mechanics, grammar, usage, and spelling.

You may use both your book and a dictionary during the exam.

 

Practice Essay 2 (In-Class Essay): Wednesday, 7 December
Topics to be announced.
You will have approximately two hours to write an essay of at least six hundred (600) words, on one of the topics provided. Before you begin to write, take time to plan your essay carefully. Essays should focus on the selected topic and contain a clear beginning (an introduction, with a thesis statement, underlined), a middle (the body paragraphs), and end (conclusion), and use appropriate topic sentences and transitions to guide the reader.

Be sure to include evidence, examples, or other support for your assertions; the more support you include, the stronger and more convincing your essay will be. You may include your own ideas or examples, but you must include evidence from the text(s) you are discussing, as well. Remember that you are not summarizing the essay, but responding to it in a critical manner, and do not copy directly from the textbook unless quoting.

Your essay will, as always, be evaluated in terms of Main Idea, Organization, Support, and Mechanics (Words and Sentences), using the standard Evaluation of Essays form. Therefore, make certain your essay is not only well organized and developed, but also grammatically correct, free of errors in mechanics, grammar, usage, and spelling.

You may use both your book and a dictionary during the exam.

 

Essay 5: Final Exam (In-Class Essay): Friday, 9 December
Topics to be announced.
You will have approximately two hours to write an essay of at least six hundred (600) words, on one of the topics provided. Before you begin to write, take time to plan your essay carefully. Essays should focus on the selected topic and contain a clear beginning (an introduction, with a thesis statement, underlined), a middle (the body paragraphs), and end (conclusion), and use appropriate topic sentences and transitions to guide the reader.

Be sure to include evidence, examples, or other support for your assertions; the more support you include, the stronger and more convincing your essay will be. You may include your own ideas or examples, but you must include evidence from the text(s) you are discussing, as well. Remember that you are not summarizing the essay, but responding to it in a critical manner, and do not copy directly from the textbook unless quoting.

Your essay will, as always, be evaluated in terms of Main Idea, Organization, Support, and Mechanics (Words and Sentences), using the standard Evaluation of Essays form. Therefore, make certain your essay is not only well organized and developed, but also grammatically correct, free of errors in mechanics, grammar, usage, and spelling.

You may use both your book and a dictionary during the exam.

 

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Links

 

Grammar, Writing, and Research Papers:

EbscoHost at LaGuardia C.C. LaGuardia C.C. Library Media Resources

Prentice Hall’s iPractice

Study Guides and Strategies

Patterns for a Purpose

How to Write a Research Paper

Online English Grammar

More on Writing a Research Paper

A Guide to Grammar & Writing

MLA-Style Citations

Another Guide to Grammar and Style

Getting an A on an English Paper

Plagiarism.org

TurnItIn.com

The Grammar Curmudgeon

Society for the Preservation of English Language and Literature

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