ENG 101: Composition I
Fall 2011
Section N1: Tue. 2:30–5:15 PM, North Annex, 500 Endo Blvd. 203
Section EG1: T/Th 5:30–
6:50 PM, South Hall 102

Keys for Writers, 5 ed.Keys for Writers, 5 ed.

Brian T. Murphy

Nassau Community College
Schedule and Office Hours
e-mail: brian.murphy@ncc.edu

or bmurphy@Brian-T-Murphy.com
 

Important Announcements and Updates

 

Thursday, December 22, 2011:
I have finished calculating and posting final grades ; you may access your grades online via Banner on the college website (login required) or here for Section EG1 and here for Section N1 (by Student ID number). Unsurprisingly, those who read and followed directions all semester did very well; those who did not read and follow directions did much worse. Good luck on any remaining final exams, and enjoy your break; as Krusty says, have a Merry Christmas, Happy Hanukkah, Kwazy Kwanzaa, and Terrific Tet!

 

Sunday, December 18, 2011:
I have finished calculating and posting final grades for Section EG1; you may access your grades online via
Banner on the college website (login required) or here (by Student ID number). Unsurprisingly, those who read and followed directions all semester did very well; those who did not read and follow directions did much worse. Good luck on any remaining final exams, and enjoy your break; as Krusty says, have a Merry Christmas, Happy Hanukkah, Kwazy Kwanzaa, and Terrific Tet!

Students in Section N1, your Final Exam (Essay Four, on “Obedience to Authority) is Tuesday, 20 Dec. Be sure you have carefully read “Constructing Reasonable Arguments” and “Evaluating Arguments” (Rules for Writers 358-380) as well as “What Is an Argument Synthesis?” (A Writer's Resource 132-140) and “Developing and Organizing the Support for Your Arguments” (WR 170-173), in addition to all of the assigned essays on “Obedience to Authority”: The Perils of Obedience” (WR 713-723) and “Replicating Milgram: Would People Still Obey Today?” (WR 713-723), “Group Minds” (WR 723-726), The Lottery” (Handout), The Stanford Prison Experiment” (WR 732-744), and “Obedience” (WR 713-723). You should bring your textbook or copies of these essays to class, as you will be required to utilize at least two or three of the essays and to include evidence, example, or other support from the texts.

Wednesday, December 14:
As per the schedule, the Final Exam (Essay Four, on “Obedience to Authority) is Thursday, 15 Dec. (Section EG1) or Tuesday, 20 Dec. (Section N1).

Be sure you have carefully read “Constructing Reasonable Arguments” and “Evaluating Arguments” (Rules for Writers 358-380) as well as “What Is an Argument Synthesis?” (A Writer's Resource 132-140) and “Developing and Organizing the Support for Your Arguments” (WR 170-173), in addition to all of the assigned essays on “Obedience to Authority”: The Perils of Obedience” (WR 713-723) and “Replicating Milgram: Would People Still Obey Today?” (WR 713-723), “Group Minds” (WR 723-726), The Lottery” (Handout), The Stanford Prison Experiment” (WR 732-744), and “Obedience” (WR 713-723). You should bring your textbook or copies of these essays to class, as you will be required to utilize at least two or three of the essays and to include evidence, example, or other support from the texts.

Tuesday, December 13:
A link for
Obedience by Ian Parker has been posted on the pages for both Section N1 and Section EG1.

As a reminder, the syllabus lists both Writing and Reading Across the Curriculum and Rules for Writers as required texts, and the class page states, Many of the essays to be read and discussed are available online; these are indicated on the schedule as hyperlinks. However, students are still strongly cautioned that they will need to purchase the textbook, both for important information and instructions on the various rhetorical modes and also for several essays not available online” and “While every effort is made to verify the accuracy and usefulness of these links and their contents, no guarantees are made. I would strongly suggest printing out copies of the required texts for the final exam, as I will not accept any excuses—for poor writing or inability to complete the essay—based on broken or missing links.

Tuesday, December 6:
The links for Group Minds” and “Replicating Milgram: Would People Still Obey Today? have been corrected on the pages for both Section N1 and Section EG1.

Monday, December 5:
The wrong page numbers are listed for several of the readings in Chapter 13, Obedience to Authority.
The correct page numbers have been posted online,
here (Section N1) or here (Section EG1).

Sunday, December 4:
This week we begin the last topic of the semester, Chapter 13: Obedience to Authority.
In addition, your Research Essay Projects are due in class this week, on Tuesday, December 6 (Section N1) or Thursday, December 8 (Section EG1).
This is also your last chance to submit any late or missing work
.

Thursday, December 1:
As announced in class, as well as posted online, the last day to submit late or missing online exercises was Wednesday, November 23. The only exercises for which I will record scores are those that were assigned on or after Tuesday, November 22. Scores for exercises assigned as homework in September or October will not be recorded.

Tuesday, November 29:
While Section N1 met as usual today, class this evening was cancelled for Section EG1, due to Evening Activity Hour.
Refer to the online schedule for changes in the assigned readings.

Wednesday, November 23:
As previously announced, today is the last day to submit late or missing online exercises previously assigned as homework; online exercises received after 12:00 will not be recorded. Scores (and current grades) can be seen at Grades101_NCC.

Due to the holiday, class will not meet again until Tuesday, November 29.
In addition, I will be offline most of the holiday weekend, so do not expect responses to your emails until Sunday or Monday.
Enjoy the break.

Tuesday, November 22, 2011:
In both sections, the Annotated Bibliography is due today.
Be sure you have read the instructions (here), and see also
 “Sample Annotated Bibliography” and “Class and Gender in Cinderella: Annotated Bibliography

In Section N1, be sure you have read “Repair Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers” (Rules 96-104) andA Debate On Gay Marriage” (WR 403-412): Bennett, William J. “Against Gay Marriage (as 'Gay Marriage: Not a Very Good Idea')” (409-411) and Sullivan, Andrew. “For Gay Marriage” (404-407); there will be an in-class writing assignment in addition to the usual online exercises for homework.

In Section EG1, be sure you have read “Repair Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers” (Rules 96-104)

To see the scores received for online exercises as well as your current (projected) grades, see Grades101_NCC.
Remember, tomorrow (November 23) is the
last day to submit any late or missing online exercises previously assigned as homework.
Note: Scores and grades accurate as of noon today, and do not reflect any submissions received after 12:00.

Tuesday, November 15, 2011 (later):
To see the scores received for online exercises thus far, as well as your current (projected) grades, see Grades101_NCC.

Tuesday, November 15, 2011:
This evening, in Section EG1, we will discuss the assigned readings from Rules for Writers: “Balance Parallel Ideas,” “Add Needed Words,” and “Untangle Mixed Constructions” (Rules 84-96), as well as The State of Our Unions” (WR 390-403).

In Section N1, we will discuss all of the above, as well as “A Pop Quiz on Marriage” (WR 376-377) and “The Radical Idea of Marrying for Love” (WR 378-390).
And, since you are reading “
A Pop Quiz on Marriage,” yes, there will be a pop quiz!

 Tuesday, November 8, 2011:
Since class attendance in Section EG1 was so sparse this evening, we will discuss A Pop Quiz on Marriage” (WR 376-377) and “The Radical Idea of Marrying for Love” (WR 378-390) on Thursday instead.

Friday, November 4, 2011:
Just a reminder: on Tuesday, November 8, day classes will follow a Friday schedule, so Section N1 will not meet. Since Section EG1 is an evening class, however, class will meet; see the revised schedule here. Also, for Section EG1, Jonathan Swift’s A Modest Proposal,” to which I referred in class on Thursday, can be read here.

Monday, October 31, 2011:
Be sure you have completed the required reading for tomorrow's class, as there may be either a quiz or an in-class writing assignment:

Section EG1: “Constructing Reasonable Arguments” and “Evaluating Arguments”  (Rules 358-380), “What Is an Argument Synthesis?” (WR 132-140), and “Developing and Organizing the Support for Your Arguments” (WR 170-173)

Section N1: all of the above, as well as “Conducting Research” and “Evaluating Sources,” “Managing Information...,” “Citing Sources...,” “Integrating Sources” (Rules 382-426) and “Documenting Sources” (Rules 382-463)

In addition, the Research Essay Topic Selection was due last week for Section EG1, and is due tomorrow for Section N1. This assignment is worth up to five points toward your final grade, the equivalent one-half letter grade. As repeatedly stressed, students must obtain prior approval for independent topics. If you have not already received permission to work on a topic other than those listed, do not ask tomorrow; I will not approve it.

As previously announced, there is a workshop on Finding Literary Criticism in Room L103 (Library first floor) from 11:30–12:45 tomorrow.

There is also an evening Grammar Review Workshop in the Writing Center Annex (Library L233A) at 7:00 pm this Thursday, Nov. 3. Topics will include Sentence Constructions (Coordination and Subordination) and Sentence Boundary Problems (Run-ons. Comma Splices, and Fragments). Seating is limited, so sign up in advance at the Writing Center in Bradley Hall (Y Bldg.) or on the second floor of the Library, room L233, or call 572-7195 or 3595.

Finally, also as previously announced, Evening Activity Hour starts at 7:00 on Tuesday, November 1, and therefore does not affect our class in any way.

Friday, October 28, 2011:
Below, by Student ID number, are the scores received for online exercises thus far, your grades on Essays 1 and 2, and your current (projected) grades.
Note: The table below has been updated as of 6:00pm, Monday, October 31.
[This information has been removed. To see current scores for online exercises and your projected grades, see Grades101_NCC instead.]

 

Sunday, October 23, 2011:
On Tuesday, October 25, we will be discussing diction; be sure you have read “Tighten Wordy Sentences,” “Choose Appropriate Language,” and “Find the Exact Words” (Rules 123-45) and be sure to bring a dictionary, thesaurus, laptop, smartphone, or iPad. Also, consider the numerous synonyms for the words “drunk” and “thin” as part of your class preparation. In addition, you should probably think about this passage (for an In-Class Exercise):

A trio of pestiferous rodentia, of the family Muridae, genus Mus, all equally afflicted with extreme visual impairment: observe their locomotion at high velocity! This afore-mentioned triad pursued the domestic partner of the agricultural worker, who responded in a retaliatory fashion by removing their posterior appendages utilizing a large kitchen implement intended to dismember prepared animals preparatory to consumption. Has such an extraordinary spectacle ever previously intruded itself upon your ocular organs?

Tuesday, October 11, 2011:
You should have received an email from me this morning; due to illness, I am forced to cancel class today. Please complete the assigned readings listed on the schedule for today before our next class (Thursday, October 13 for Section EG1; Tuesday, October 18 for Section N1). We will discuss changes to the schedule when we meet again; changes have also been posted on the Schedule for Section N1 or EG1. Pay special attention to changes in due dates for Essay 2 and Research Paper Topic Selections

Wednesday, October 5, 2011:
The link for Kimberly Ebel’s “Class and Gender in Cinderella: Annotated Bibliography” has been corrected and should work properly now.

Thursday, September 29, 2011:
As previously announced, and as per the main page and syllabus, class does not meet today.
See you next Tuesday instead, with your Essay 1 Revisions and/or Resubmissions

Wednesday, September 28, 2011:
As announced in class, I have returned Essay 1 without assigning letter grades, but with many specific comments, and you have until next Tuesday (October 4) to revise and/or resubmit your essay. If you are convinced it needs no work, simply hand in the same essay on Tuesday, red ink and all, to receive a letter grade. Otherwise, you may revise and resubmit; remember, your revisions must be submitted with the original marked essay attached. If you did not submit an essay on time, you may still receive credit: bring a completed, typed draft of  Essay 1 to the Writing Center to receive assistance and recommendations; then, revise that essay, and submit both copies on Tuesday for grading.

Remember that class does not meet on Thursday; I will see you next Tuesday instead.

Friday, September 23, 2011:
If everything goes as planned, Essay 1 will be graded and returned on Tuesday, September 27; revisions will be due one week later, on Tuesday, October 4.

Also, note that the first Extra Credit opportunities have been posted: the Writing Center's Grammar Review Workshops. If students attend one or more of these workshops, and provide evidence of attendance along with a typed one- to two-page personal response (review, analysis, reflection, critique, et cetera), they can receive additional points: a single workshop and written response is worth 2 points extra credit; attendance at additional workshops will earn one additional point each.

Tuesday, September 20, 2011:
Essay 1 is due in class today, contrasting any two of the seven versions of “Cinderella” found in your textbook (also available online; see below). Be sure to focus carefully on the topic, and remember that these are formal essays: they must have an appropriate, original title; contain an introduction, body, and conclusion; have a clear, explicit, assertive, objectively worded thesis statement (thesis statements must be underlined); and (unless otherwise indicated) avoid use of I or you throughout. Essays must be typed (in 12-point Times New Roman), double-spaced, with standard (one- to one-and-a-quarter inch) margins, and stapled when submitted; they must include a proper heading, including Word Count, have an appropriate, original title, and be free of errors in mechanics, grammar, usage, spelling, and documentation.

Wednesday, September 12, 2011:
I have added links for all seven of the versions of “Cinderella” to the online schedule; select the appropriate section from the links below (links open in new window):

     Section N1: Tue. 2:30–5:15 PM, North Annex, 500 Endo Blvd. 203

     Section EG1: T/Th 5:30–6:50 PM, South Hall 102

Monday, September 12, 2011:
For tomorrow, Tuesday, Sept. 13, be sure to read “Generating Ideas...” and “Roughing Out an Initial Draft” (Rules 1-27) and “Introductions, Theses, and Conclusions” (WR 72-90) (Section N1 only) and “Summary” (WR 1-23) and “The Comparison-and-Contrast Synthesis” (WR 173-181) (Sections N1 and EG1).

Also, consider the eternal superhero debate: Superman or Batman, and why?

Monday, September 5, 2011:
I hope everyone enjoyed Labor Day weekend. The main page and syllabus have been revised to correct several non-working links and typographical errors; While every effort is made to verify the accuracy and usefulness of these links and their contents, no guarantees are made. Please notify me of any broken or outdated links at bmurphy@Brian-T-Murphy.com.

Thursday, September 1, 2011:
Although it is not yet Labor Day, day, evening, and distance learning/online classes for the Fall 2011 semester begin today.

Wednesday, August 24, 2011:
The main page and syllabus have been updated for the Fall 2011 semester.

 

 

 

 

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